Hey, the one person who actually talks back to me on tumblr! XD Pretty much everyone else ignores when I respond to their posts. Well, I’d be willing to critique your story and tell you what I think. ^^
aaahhhh. maaybeee.
This is why I never submitted to my school’s literary magazine, goddamnit. Knowing people are actually critiquing work I’m not 100% is nervewracking.
I just have nerve problems, I think.
Um! Well it’s about like, a present day kingdom in another world and a very corrupt prince was crowned king. annd pretty much his royal adviser is trying to dethrone him.
If you like that sort of thing. »